Creative Corner 14
Welcome to GIRL's CREATIVE CORNER - a place to let your imagination run wild! Submit your poetry, short stories or artwork!
Congratulations to last month' s winners. Here are the creative winning pieces:
I walked to the beach with a guy; he looked sexy to say the least.
His eyes, his hair,
I could do nothing but stare
As it got dark and cold.
All I could think about was her to hold, it was getting late,
But still before 8.
But soon she was gone
And I still don't know what I did wrong..
- Danii
A man just had a new haircut and washed his hair. He was waiting to be served at the pub. He hears a voice say, 'Your hair looks great...never looked better..." The man looks around and doesn't see anyone...so he asks the barman and the barman laughs and says, "oh that's the peanuts..they are complimentary!!"
- Elly Chen
Friends are real.....
You're my friend; our love is true,
But I don't always mean what I say to you,
I say harsh things, but you are strong,
All the things I do seem wrong.
You're my friend, and you deserve respect,
But that's not always what you get.
You ignore my bitchiness and lies,
But deep inside, it makes you cry.
You say you don't care and that you don't mind,
But I'm still sorry for when I'm unkind.
If I can't help it, I'll always care.
Your friendship's important, I want you there.
I don't wanna lose a friend like you,
For someone like me, there is so few.
All I can hope is, till the end,
You'll stick by me, as my FRIEND!
- Jackie Lees
STABBING WORDS
I hear you speak
I feel your words
They stab me like a thousand knives
It's hard to take them without fear
I handle, but inside it tears me apart
I am not as strong as you think
Even though I don't show my feelings
It doesn't mean they aren't there
My mind may not be strong
My body is
When I fall it does not hurt as much as, your stabbing words
So I say this to you
Next when you have anger towards me
Think how you act
Put away your stabbing words and imagine being hurt
And you will know the pain you have just saved
By not saying you're stabbing words.
- Emily Greco
PAUL...
You left me suddenly your thoughts unknown,
but you left me with memories I'm proud to own
And when old times I do recall
Here's when I miss you most of all.
Deep in my heart a memory is kept
Of someone I loved and will never forget.
- Vicki Bladen
There once was a young girl from Adelaide
Who thought all her Xmas's were made
When she searched on the web
She almost dropped dead
When she found girl.com.au she could raid
- Sierra Ridley
If you would like to submit work to Creative Corner, simply email Michelle@girl.com.au with your submissions.
Congratulations to last month' s winners. Here are the creative winning pieces:
I walked to the beach with a guy; he looked sexy to say the least.
His eyes, his hair,
I could do nothing but stare
As it got dark and cold.
All I could think about was her to hold, it was getting late,
But still before 8.
But soon she was gone
And I still don't know what I did wrong..
- Danii
A man just had a new haircut and washed his hair. He was waiting to be served at the pub. He hears a voice say, 'Your hair looks great...never looked better..." The man looks around and doesn't see anyone...so he asks the barman and the barman laughs and says, "oh that's the peanuts..they are complimentary!!"
- Elly Chen
Friends are real.....
You're my friend; our love is true,
But I don't always mean what I say to you,
I say harsh things, but you are strong,
All the things I do seem wrong.
You're my friend, and you deserve respect,
But that's not always what you get.
You ignore my bitchiness and lies,
But deep inside, it makes you cry.
You say you don't care and that you don't mind,
But I'm still sorry for when I'm unkind.
If I can't help it, I'll always care.
Your friendship's important, I want you there.
I don't wanna lose a friend like you,
For someone like me, there is so few.
All I can hope is, till the end,
You'll stick by me, as my FRIEND!
- Jackie Lees
STABBING WORDS
I hear you speak
I feel your words
They stab me like a thousand knives
It's hard to take them without fear
I handle, but inside it tears me apart
I am not as strong as you think
Even though I don't show my feelings
It doesn't mean they aren't there
My mind may not be strong
My body is
When I fall it does not hurt as much as, your stabbing words
So I say this to you
Next when you have anger towards me
Think how you act
Put away your stabbing words and imagine being hurt
And you will know the pain you have just saved
By not saying you're stabbing words.
- Emily Greco
PAUL...
You left me suddenly your thoughts unknown,
but you left me with memories I'm proud to own
And when old times I do recall
Here's when I miss you most of all.
Deep in my heart a memory is kept
Of someone I loved and will never forget.
- Vicki Bladen
There once was a young girl from Adelaide
Who thought all her Xmas's were made
When she searched on the web
She almost dropped dead
When she found girl.com.au she could raid
- Sierra Ridley
If you would like to submit work to Creative Corner, simply email Michelle@girl.com.au with your submissions.
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